devils_angel 19-06-2005, 06:27 PM hey am jst posting things tat i sometimes scribble down
Deceiving Eyes
One day without my permission you entered my life
Since that day everything you did seemed right
The moments we were lost in each others eyes
All i saw was truth no lies
Slowly we started drifting away
When we met we had nothing to say
I thought about you from day to day
"Don't Seperate Us" to god i prayed
We no longer were a 'one' but a 'two'
I cried not knowing what to do
I thought it was me who was crude
Later i realized it wasn't me but you
By: Diya Kumar
*Red Angel* 20-06-2005, 04:55 AM Awwwww........that's nice Diya! :) Tis good. ;)
royce4u2002 20-06-2005, 11:31 AM phew!!! diya how u think of like that yaar
i cant even scribble such things:p
mainne soch ke bhi likha to itna accha nahi likh sakta :D
nice diya :thumbs_up
DesiBeauty 20-06-2005, 12:12 PM Wow Diya.. thats such a touching poem...
Hmm I can realte to it :)
devils_angel 20-06-2005, 04:56 PM thnx red angel :)
aww mudassar ji.. ur too much.. jst some thought ji.. aur kuch nai.. par shukriya :D
aur danu thnx!!
royce4u2002 20-06-2005, 11:53 PM juss thoughts....kya baat hai are thoughts hai ya bomb
dhamke karte hai :D
good yaar ;) koi hai kya ahem ahem jisko yeh likha tha
*Red Angel* 21-06-2005, 03:12 AM thnx red angel :)
aww mudassar ji.. ur too much.. jst some thought ji.. aur kuch nai.. par shukriya :D
aur danu thnx!!
No probbie, your welcome. ;)
royce4u2002 22-06-2005, 02:35 AM diya ji ko puccha kisko likha to gayab ho gayee :D
devils_angel 26-06-2005, 05:34 PM lolz maddy.. this was written like last year.. tab te ek munda.. i'll prob. post a new one tomm.. n tat one's gonna b for w/e's happening in my life now
royce4u2002 27-06-2005, 05:09 AM lolz maddy.. this was written like last year.. tab te ek munda.. i'll prob. post a new one tomm.. n tat one's gonna b for w/e's happening in my life now
damn diya thats kewl do it yaar
i wanna c how u get ur feelings in :D
devils_angel 12-07-2005, 05:52 PM k here's the new one...
A YEAR, A SECOND, A LIFETIME
What just happened now is unbelievable
I can feel my heart overflowing with love
You just made my life have a 1000 meanings
What you said in a second, will last for a lifetime
I can't believe this is happening to me
This is every girl's dream come true
It might not seem much to you
But i'm floating on top of the world
I waited for the response for a year
It happened in a second
I won't forget it in a lifetime
The three words which means all the happiness
I LOVE YOU
By: Diya Kumar
skater 19-07-2005, 07:18 AM http://img112.imageshack.us/img112/9621/xperiment26wn.gif
Sitare toot bhi jayein
sumander sookh bhi jayin
zameen ki kookh k saab Astaray
rooth bhi jayin
saba,gul aur baharoon se kinara kar nahin sakti
MOHABAT MAR NAHIN SAKTI
zamana beet jaye ga
zamanay beet jate hain
Fana ki vadyoon main ,rooz mere geet jate hain
diloon ki khetyoon ko zeher de kar bar-ha
zalim k lashkar jeet jate hain
magar
nafrat ki tund-o-taiz zalim andhyoon main bhi
fiza main ik nani preet koil
daar nahin sakti
MOHABAT MAR NAHIN SAKTI
*Red Angel* 19-07-2005, 04:18 PM Diya....that was lovely....it was GREAT! ;)
Sultan yours too...was FAB... :)
devils_angel 26-07-2005, 12:18 PM thnx shaz!!!
arre wa sultan.. reallly awesome!!!! ;)
n it's tru
mohabat mar nahi sakti.......... buh tere's a twist
mohabat mar nahi sakti agar sach ho thi! :)
DesiBeauty 21-08-2005, 08:30 AM Thats so true yaar, did you write any thing more?
hey am jst posting things tat i sometimes scribble down
Deceiving Eyes
One day without my permission you entered my life
Since that day everything you did seemed right
The moments we were lost in each others eyes
All i saw was truth no lies
Slowly we started drifting away
When we met we had nothing to say
I thought about you from day to day
"Don't Seperate Us" to god i prayed
We no longer were a 'one' but a 'two'
I cried not knowing what to do
I thought it was me who was crude
Later i realized it wasn't me but you
By: Diya Kumar
*Applause!*
Hey Diya,they're wonderful yaar.I've always started to write poems..even a story too,but I wouldn't go through because I'd either lose interest or run out of ideas :(
I even dreamed of writing a script too,but I just don't know how you put one incident from which you can see a glimpse of each characters' behaviour.It's essential and I needn't tell you that lol
Anyways,they are wonderful.Keep it up :4:
wow diya dat soo gud i wotn even knw hwo to rite da first word of dat kepe it up
miss_teryus 17-09-2005, 06:23 PM u're really good at this diya!
u wanna see my scribbles? lol
hehe :D
*bhootni frantically scribbling*
miss_teryus 17-09-2005, 06:26 PM *Applause!*
Hey Diya,they're wonderful yaar.I've always started to write poems..even a story too,but I wouldn't go through because I'd either lose interest or run out of ideas :(
I even dreamed of writing a script too,but I just don't know how you put one incident from which you can see a glimpse of each characters' behaviour.It's essential and I needn't tell you that lol
Anyways,they are wonderful.Keep it up :4:
oOo there was a point at which i wanted to write a novel...loool
and i wanted to write a script as well...
and then i settled for stories..
but all i could write were corny lil poems...that are so pethetic its embarrassing :p
*sigh* my childish dreams :p
leila_r 18-09-2005, 02:40 AM k here's the new one...
A YEAR, A SECOND, A LIFETIME
What just happened now is unbelievable
I can feel my heart overflowing with love
You just made my life have a 1000 meanings
What you said in a second, will last for a lifetime
I can't believe this is happening to me
This is every girl's dream come true
It might not seem much to you
But i'm floating on top of the world
I waited for the response for a year
It happened in a second
I won't forget it in a lifetime
The three words which means all the happiness
I LOVE YOU
By: Diya Kumar
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*fainted*
devils_angel 10-10-2006, 11:47 AM thnx guyz, like i said it's jst scribbles nuttin too serious.. n these were poems from high scul... now i barely get time to right poems.. lol
but i did write one the other day.. if i find it i'll post it here k... n also bhoot KEEP SCRIBBLING!!! one day i jst scribbled on a paper n da pic actually made sense of how twisted ma life is lol... :p
awwww
i wanna read them...
show if u can find..
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